Slicer S. V.
New member
my first in like... 2 years... is that bad? a 2 yr writers block? hehe anyways, i would like to say that after i was done scribbling it out and read over what i wrote i was like... where did this come from? cuz, i really can't think of any example in my life of this kinda thing, so it just dropped out of the blue... unless it has something to do with all the hikki i've been listening to lately ^^
I was going along one day,
minding only myself.
You came that day,
to help those that let.
We met, we talked...
seemed we knew each other,
yet never before we met.
The universal law,
nature of the universe.
Opposite-equal...
opposites attract.
The timeless love,
some people are destined.
One day some time ago,
a day past yet still here...
We met, we talked...
though different in many ways,
something just clicked.
You were Nipponjin,
me English to the core.
You a kind, soft heart...
mine hardened with bad past.
Yet when we met that day,
a balance shifted,
time froze yet went on.
The universal law,
nature of the universe.
Opposite-equal...
opposites attract.
The timeless love,
some people are destined.
An interminable instant,
the month in a moment...
I can keep no secret...
when it comes down to it...
i'm hopelessly infatuated.
Note: in case you don't know any japanese and couldn't figure out the context clues, nipponjin is japanese for a japanese person...
so what do you guys think? any good for the first poem in 2 yrs? indeed the first thing i've written excepting that queer fleas thing a short time ago...
i'm still wondering where the poem came from... cuz, just as most people who write, i have no control of the flow of ideas, i can only adjust the language and structure after the fact...
a second note: i'm posting this here as a copy from my post in vgmp3... there are people there who don't come here, and people here who don't go there... but then... there are those who visit both, so if you think you've seen this exact same thing somewhere else... well, you just may have <img src=smilies/thumb.gif>
<P ID="signature"></P>
I was going along one day,
minding only myself.
You came that day,
to help those that let.
We met, we talked...
seemed we knew each other,
yet never before we met.
The universal law,
nature of the universe.
Opposite-equal...
opposites attract.
The timeless love,
some people are destined.
One day some time ago,
a day past yet still here...
We met, we talked...
though different in many ways,
something just clicked.
You were Nipponjin,
me English to the core.
You a kind, soft heart...
mine hardened with bad past.
Yet when we met that day,
a balance shifted,
time froze yet went on.
The universal law,
nature of the universe.
Opposite-equal...
opposites attract.
The timeless love,
some people are destined.
An interminable instant,
the month in a moment...
I can keep no secret...
when it comes down to it...
i'm hopelessly infatuated.
Note: in case you don't know any japanese and couldn't figure out the context clues, nipponjin is japanese for a japanese person...
so what do you guys think? any good for the first poem in 2 yrs? indeed the first thing i've written excepting that queer fleas thing a short time ago...
i'm still wondering where the poem came from... cuz, just as most people who write, i have no control of the flow of ideas, i can only adjust the language and structure after the fact...
a second note: i'm posting this here as a copy from my post in vgmp3... there are people there who don't come here, and people here who don't go there... but then... there are those who visit both, so if you think you've seen this exact same thing somewhere else... well, you just may have <img src=smilies/thumb.gif>
<P ID="signature"></P>