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Old 07-21-2006, 05:27 AM   #1
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I was at the library this afternoon on my lunch break (yes, I am a total loser, and I do it about three times a week). I was at one of the tables, and there was this book sitting right in the middle of the desk. It was called: Annie's Baby: The Diary of Anonymous, a Pregnant Teenager

So of course, I pick it up and read a few pages. Those few pages turn into THE WHOLE FUCKING BOOK. It was so goddamn great. Let me break it down:
<ul> [*]Plain 14-year-old girl meets rich high school jock[*]He seems to like her, they go out on a secret date[*]He's so wonderful![*]In a few weeks, he starts talking about sex.[*]She won't give out.[*]He gets mean.[*]She gives out.[*]He practically rapes her, and beats her up afterwards.[*]He avoids her at school[*]Becomes nice again when he wants to fuck her again.[*]They fuck, but he "forgets" a condom[*]Girl gets pregnant[*]Girl enters lonely shame spiral[*]Girl confronts boyfriend, who calls her the town whore, then beats her up, trying to kill the baby by punching her stomach.[*]Girl finally tells mother (father not in this story...how convenient, because he would've totally beaten up the boyfriend)[*]Mother doesn't get mad, and is totally supportive (bullshit)[*]Mother decides to take daughter to doctors and teen councilor[*]They go over everything, but kinda gloss over abortion[*]Girl has Jesus moment, and decides to keep the baby.[*]Girl somehow befriends another girl in same situation as her. How lucky.[*]Girl has premature baby (of course)[*]Girl can't raise the baby by herself. They talk to a bishop, who JUST happens to have relatives looking to adopt.[*]Dilemma! Keep the baby, or give it away???[*]Girls gives away baby, pretending to be happy.[*]Girl Power(tm) moment, as girl realizes she's in total control of her wonderful life. She takes a moment to thank her mother and God.[/list]
This book was the biggest pile of horseshit. The author tried to pass it off as a real diary, but she was really out of touch. There was liberal use of the word "rad", but keep in mind---this book came out in 1998!

The best part is the dude that knocks her up. He's borderline NUTS. He beats her a bunch of times, and rapes her, and tries to kill the baby with his fists. Not only that, but he gets away with EVERYTHING. The part when he calls her the town cum catcher is fucking priceless.

Anyhow, I just thought I'd share that.
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Old 07-21-2006, 05:31 AM   #2
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> Anyhow, I just thought I'd share that.
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You just made me want to read this book.
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Old 07-21-2006, 06:09 AM   #3
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> I was at the library this afternoon on my lunch break (yes,
> I am a total loser, and I do it about three times a week).
> I was at one of the tables, and there was this book sitting
> right in the middle of the desk. It was called: Annie's
> Baby: The Diary of Anonymous, a Pregnant Teenager

Doesn't this belong in the "erotic stories" thread?

Anyways, that was a good post, I started spanking it really hard right around the part where he beats up and rapes her.
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Old 07-21-2006, 11:13 AM   #4
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> calls her the town cum catcher is fucking priceless.

I like to say cum dumpster or semen recepticle.
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Old 07-21-2006, 03:05 PM   #5
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It's from the same lady behing "Go Ask Alice" .. I actually enjoyed that book, but it was off by quite a bit.

"Speak" is another good "teenage drama" book. <img src=smilies/thumb.gif>

The Catcher In the Rye sucked though. I might have missed something, but from what I read.. it was about an emo kid from the 1940s.
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Old 07-22-2006, 07:39 PM   #6
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Totally rad.

To the max.
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